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KIM YUNA (Topic)

KIM YUNA is Queen of the South Korean figure skater.(Topic sentence) She's figure skater athlete. She's 22 year old Height 164 cm and weighs 47 kg. She very cute girl.(Supporting sentence) She began training at age 7 years.Until the year 2545 , She has participated in the competition figure skating for the first time and won the gold medal of the competition in it. And then She has to compete in a higher level . And win many awards.(Supporting sentence) When she became famous She has been referred Queen onto ice. It is also a favorite of many celebrities. As well as a favorite of the South Korean. Because her ability and her shiny KIM YUNA contacted to be moderator in "KIM YONA KISS AND CRY" game shows about skate which bring all 10 competitor race and learn how to play skate by professional.(Supporting sentence) All of this make it's not to deny that KIM YUNA is the Queen of the South Korean figure skater. Meanwhile, she like a famous star that have been a first rank hot star in South Korean.(Concluding sentence)