Second Draft (AQUACAR)

Ship Car (Topic)

                  The car look like car and ship is name "Aqua Car"(Topic sentence)  A car created to solve the problem of transportation when flooding. This car has the frame like car other. When an accident or natural disaster which caused flooding. It will wheel inside and the belly of ship to replace. Engine has waterproof system. It is waterproof maximum 10 hr without effect. You can change the wheel by pressing keypad. Kind of fuel does it uses Gasoline like a car. It can run 160 kilometers per hour on the road, and 80 kilometers per hour on the water. This project had been invented by "Alan Gibson Debs" Business New Zealand. And has partnered with "Neil Jenkins" They created such a car company Gibbs Technologies was founded in 1999. It's called AQUADA price 10.5 million baht. It too expensive for other people. So I want a lot of people can not buy this car for flooding.(Supporting sentence)
  Finally the ship car is name "Aqua car" price is start 900,000 bath. In Thailand, we got a problem flooding frequent. If you can see avail, you will have to pay for it of course.(Concluding sentence)

In-text citation = (Gibbs, 1995)
Reference list = Gibbs, A. (1995). Vehicles in the flood of Technology. Retrieved from http://www.kunkroo.com/catalog.php?idp=66.